2014-02-26

Hey there!


Zsadi recommended this article:




Have you ever made one of those? I find the first one -- using "it's" instead of "its" -- particularly annoying.

Happy Writing!

- Raum

2014-02-24

How are Bella and Edward spending their time together? Edward is going to make an important promise. The new chapter is ready: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8955111/31/


She was that single flower that the poet couldn't send to his readers from a different time.


Camilla's short poem (SatinCoveredSteel helped to translate it):

Ormai i giochi sono fatti
tutti i dadi sono tratti:
per aver l' eterno amore
lui dovrà fermarle il cuore.


That’s all folks, and at length,
decisions have been made with strength:
to gain eternal love, to start,
he will have to stop her heart.




The Epilogue is due to be posted next week!
Reviewers get a little gift.

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Unending Love, by Rabindranath Tagore

I seem to have loved you in numberless forms, numberless times…
In life after life, in age after age, forever.
My spellbound heart has made and remade the necklace of songs,
That you take as a gift, wear round your neck in your many forms,
In life after life, in age after age, forever.

Whenever I hear old chronicles of love, its age-old pain,
Its ancient tale of being apart or together.
As I stare on and on into the past, in the end you emerge,
Clad in the light of a pole-star piercing the darkness of time:
You become an image of what is remembered forever.

You and I have floated here on the stream that brings from the fount.
At the heart of time, love of one for another.
We have played along side millions of lovers, shared in the same
Shy sweetness of meeting, the same distressful tears of farewell-
Old love but in shapes that renew and renew forever.

Today it is heaped at your feet, it has found its end in you
The love of all man’s days both past and forever:
Universal joy, universal sorrow, universal life.
The memories of all loves merging with this one love of ours –
And the songs of every poet past and forever.

-x-x-x-x-x-x-

The Gardener [85], by Rabindranath Tagore

Who are you, reader, reading my poems an hundred years hence?
I cannot send you one single flower from this wealth of the spring, one single streak of gold from yonder clouds.
Open your doors and look abroad.

From your blossoming garden gather fragrant memories of the vanished flowers of an hundred years before.
In the joy of your heart may you feel the living joy that sang one spring morning, sending its glad voice across an hundred years.

2014-02-21


Ehd, the new Pre-historical hero by Shay Savage, is waiting for you!




It’s said that women and men are from two different planets when it comes to communication, but how can they overcome the obstacles of prehistoric times when one of them simply doesn’t have the ability to comprehend language?
Ehd’s a caveman living on his own in a harsh wilderness. He’s strong and intelligent, but completely alone. When he finds a beautiful young woman in his pit trap, it’s obvious to him that she is meant to be his mate. He doesn’t know where she came from; she’s wearing some pretty odd clothing, and she makes a lot of noises with her mouth that give him a headache. Still, he’s determined to fulfill his purpose in life – provide for her, protect her, and put a baby in her.
Elizabeth doesn’t know where she is or exactly how she got there. She’s confused and distressed by her predicament, and there’s a caveman hauling her back to his cavehome. She’s not at all interested in Ehd’s primitive advances, and she just can’t seem to get him to listen. No matter what she tries, getting her point across to this primitive, but beautiful, man is a constant – and often hilarious – struggle.
With only each other for company, they must rely on one another to fight the dangers of the wild and prepare for the winter months. As they struggle to coexist, theirs becomes a love story that transcends language and time.

Publication Date: February 14th 2014
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Raum's review

"When Savage decided to put herself in the shoes (err...Ehd would think of them as "feet-coverings") of a primitive man, she accepted a very difficult challenge. 
 
Transcendence isn't just a story that required a good deal of research to be believable and that will make you learn many things about life in a world so distant and different from ours. It's a story where human relationships are very, very different from anything you may have read in a novel: the thing that intrigued me most is that this story features (almost) no dialogue.
 
Ehd doesn't talk. Why? Have you ever heard about "brain differentiation" or "Broca’s area"? Savage has, and she's done her homework: Broca's area is a region in the brain with functions linked to speech production. Ehd can't elaborate a speech, nor can he learn to do it.

But he thinks, and reading Transcendence you'll follow his thoughts through the whole story.
 
I'm writing so much about Ehd because his mind is a very nice place to be. He doesn't know deception or schemes. He can love fiercely, he's brave, and he can show strength when it's needed to protect the people he loves.

He's lost everything he had when he was a boy, he's spent a long time completely alone, but he hasn't lost the hope to have a woman to love and a new family, and he's ready to sacrifice everything for it.

When he meets Elisabeth, you'll witness the meeting between two worlds: our world, and a one we can barely imagine. 

Lost, terrified,  Elizabeth can only think that her situation is hopeless: a savage who can't even speak has her. But the savage is a gentleman, and the nobility of his spirit will slowly manifest itself.
 
If you've read other works by Shay Savage, you already know that, with her, the unexpected is always around the corner. I'm sure Savage will surprise you once again with this story and the characters' choices."


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Excerpt #1

Looking down at my mate, my fingers reach out and brush strands of her beautiful long hair away from her forehead. The softness distracts me from her sorrow, and I pinch a few of the strands between my fingers to hold them out and look more closely. The firelight brings out the slight tinges of red in a few of the strands, but it is the texture that intrigues me the most.
As I look back at her face, I can see she is still frightened. Releasing her hair, I reach up and let the tips of my fingers touch the tear stains on her cheeks. I feel like crying for her—lost and alone out on the steppes. I touch slowly her cheek and jaw before my hand finds her shoulder and the incredibly smooth tunic covering her. Like her hair, I find it fascinating. I have never felt anything as smooth and soft. It’s lightweight, too—as if it were made from strands of a spider’s web.
I stroke her hair again to feel the difference between its softness and the texture of the clothing and find myself again fascinated by how soft and beautiful it is. I know I am very lucky to have found such an attractive mate though I am really just thrilled to have another person with me. As I take a deep breath, I inhale the scent of her hair, and the combination of sweet fruit and possibly some kind of flower confuses me—it is still too early in the season for buds to be blooming. Pulling her close to me, I run my nose from her hairline to her temple.
Definitely fruit.
She tenses again, and I’m reminded that she is sad and frightened about the loss of her people. I look into her eyes and tilt my head to the side, wanting her to know I understand. I touch my nose to her temple again—gently bumping her skin in a show of companionship.
Her tongue darts over her lips, and she makes her rhythmic sounds again. She is not as loud this time, but the noise is strange and unfamiliar to me. I continue to watch her closely until she stops making the sounds and lets out a long breath. She sniffs and turns away from me again but seems to have settled down somewhat.
I lay my head next to hers and strengthen my grip around her body. I keep my eyes open and watch the entrance to the cave until I hear her breathing slowly and regularly with sleep. Only when I’m sure she is no longer awake do I allow myself to do the same.
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Excerpt #2
Thankfully, my mate does not wake up as I crawl back into the furs beside her. I know she needs to rest. I take a moment to look at her in the flickering firelight. Her eyes are closed, but the blotchy remnants of her sorrow are still evident on her cheeks.
I want to touch her skin, but I don’t want to wake her. Unable to control the urge completely, I touch the skin of her face carefully. I reach down to her strange clothing again, and my fingers brush from her shoulder, over her breast, and down to her waist as I enjoy the feel of the cloth compared to the rough skin of my hand.
She stirs slightly, so I still my movements, deciding to be satisfied with leaving one arm wrapped around her. I stretch out next to her and pull the furs up to make sure she is warm enough. Her mouth opens slightly, and she makes more strange noises in her sleep. The sounds are very soft and deep in tone. Her face scrunches up a bit, and her breathing becomes more rapid. I hold her closer to me until she relaxes back into deeper sleep.
I know I must be right, and she has recently lost her people. I wonder what happened to them and if I will ever know for sure. It doesn’t matter now, anyway—I will be her mate, and I will take care of her from now on. I just need to figure out a way to stop her from being frightened of me. There are so many things I will need from her as well: she will need to gather food for the winter, cook the meat I bring back for her, and accept me into her body so I can give her children.
The thought of that brings another smile to my face and a tingling feeling between my legs.
However, she seems so frightened of me now, I don’t think she would readily position herself on her hands and knees so I can fill her. Still, I am much stronger, and if I want inside of her, I can just hold her while I enter her body. Joining with her in such a way would still feel very good, I imagine, but I don’t like it when she yells and cries, and I think she would probably do that if I have to hold her down to mate with her.
These thoughts are making my penis lengthen and become stiff. I consider stroking myself, but I am afraid it will wake her. I sigh as I look down on her sleeping face and wonder how long it will be before I can properly mate with her. I touch her cheek softly again, and I know when I decide to lie with her, I want her to enjoy it. So how do I get that to happen?
Finally, after thinking about it a long time, I decide I need to make her like me.
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About the Author

Shay Savage lives in Cincinnati, Ohio with her husband, two children, and a variety of household pets. She is an accomplished public speaker, and holds the rank of Distinguished Toastmaster from Toastmasters International. When not writing, she enjoys science fiction movies, and loves soccer in any and all forms. During the fall, she coaches her daughter’s soccer team. Though she currently works in the technology field, her school background is in psychology, and she brings a lot of that knowledge into the characters within her stories.

Connect with Shay Savage!

 

2014-02-19

"Average copywriters write average sentences. You, I’m guessing, don’t want to be average.
You want to be great. You believe you can be remarkable." (CopyBlogger.com)



It doesn't apply only to copywriters, right?

If you want to be a remarkable writer, why don't you give a look at the following tutorial?




You'll learn to:

1. Insert Facts
2. Create Images
3. Evoke Emotion
4. Make Promises
5. Practice, practice, practice...

Happy Writing!

- Raum

2014-02-17

You gave VampCharlie a warm welcome, but how will Bella react? Get your answer: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8955111/30/


In this chapter Edward is going to talk about his piano

Camilla's short poem (SatinCoveredSteel helped to translate it):

Al sicuro in Canadà
Bella vuole il suo papà;
ma è difficile pensarlo
com'è ora, ed accettarlo.


Safe, away in Canada,
Bella thinks about her Papa.
But learning what has come to pass
is hard for her to take, alas.





The new chapter is due to be posted in just one week!
Reviewers get a little gift.

2014-02-12

Do you listen to music while you read? Do you have favorite songs that help you concentrate?



I've found a playlist with the intriguing title "Music for Reading" and thought you might enjoy it.

Here you go:


It's pretty relaxing, so it can help you to get ready for a nap or a peaceful sleep.

2014-02-10

Charlie's story isn't over. This chapter will tell you why: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8955111/29/




Camilla's short poem (SatinCoveredSteel helped to translate it):

Ora ad Edward tutto dice
la vampira buona Alice.
Il mistero è rivelato:
Charlie è stato trasformato.


Now Alice, of the good vampires,
answers Edward when he inquires.
At last the mystery has a solution:
Charlie’s gone through the transformation.



The new chapter is due to be posted in just one week!
Reviewers get a little gift.

2014-02-05

When to use Paragraphs:



  1. A new character comes along 
  2. A new event happens or a new idea is introduced 
  3. A new setting 
  4. A new person begins speaking 
  5. Time moves forward (or backward)
Thanks to Zsadi for the kind suggestion!

2014-02-04

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2014-02-02

It’s said that women and men are from two different planets when it comes to communication, but how can they overcome the obstacles of prehistoric times when one of them simply doesn’t have the ability to comprehend language?

Ehd’s a caveman living on his own in a harsh wilderness. He’s strong and intelligent, but completely alone. When he finds a beautiful young woman in his pit trap, it’s obvious to him that she is meant to be his mate. He doesn’t know where she came from; she’s wearing some pretty odd clothing, and she makes a lot of noises with her mouth that give him a headache. Still, he’s determined to fulfill his purpose in life – provide for her, protect her, and put a baby in her. 

Elizabeth doesn’t know where she is or exactly how she got there. She’s confused and distressed by her predicament, and there’s a caveman hauling her back to his cavehome. She’s not at all interested in Ehd’s primitive advances, and she just can’t seem to get him to listen. No matter what she tries, getting her point across to this primitive, but beautiful, man is a constant – and often hilarious – struggle. With only each other for company, they must rely on one another to fight the dangers of the wild and prepare for the winter months. As they struggle to coexist, theirs becomes a love story that transcends language and time.

Title: Transcendence Author: Shay Savage Genre: Pre-historical Romance Expected Release Date: 2.14.14
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Goodreads:
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Shay Savage lives in Cincinnati, Ohio with her husband, two children, and a variety of household pets. She is an accomplished public speaker, and holds the rank of Distinguished Toastmaster from Toastmasters International. When not writing, she enjoys science fiction movies, and loves soccer in any and all forms. During the fall, she coaches her daughter’s soccer team.
Though she currently works in the technology field, her school background is in psychology, and she brings a lot of that knowledge into the characters within her stories.
https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/5160667.Shay_Savage


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